My letter to the Inc Co.

I don't want to sound to cheesy when I write my letter to the insurance company. Anyone have some pointers on what to write or what NOT to write? I don't want to over do it. I want it to be just right but, so far I think what I have might be over doing it. Any help to get me going in the right direction will be greatly appreciated. Thank you -Billie Jo

Billie Jo, definitely head over to the insurance forum message board to glean some advice from posts there. People post letters there and give advice in addition to asking questions. The forum leader there is a really nice guy who happens to be an obesity lawyer. Molly