A bedtime story...any writers out there?

cabin111
on 8/6/07 1:51 pm
I was thinking of writing another bedtime story but I only got 5 hours sleep last night.  Had to double back at work.  So I thought of a start of a story and I thought some of you (with extra time on your hands), may want to take the story and run with it... One day Barry Betwelve met Larry Labsar-Fine for a pickup game of racquetball...
CollegeJoe
on 8/6/07 6:59 pm

The game was fought inside the public gym it cried  with the sounds of failure cursing the sounds of manure Barry had set the game into play  Larry quickly set the ball back its way  They did their best to beat each other  Sweating and shouting MOTHER... Hours past and both were tired Yet, they fought, still wired Until Larry cried for a break  A deal Barry would not make  The score was even, 0 to 0 Both wanted to be deemed the hero Alas, one fell but not from the game For Larry fainted on the floor and Barry dismayed  He begged his friend to be revived  Sadly, Larry was no longer alive Games are played with a vice But don't gamble your friends or pay the price

Mike Ray
on 8/7/07 12:09 am - South Houston, TX
I'll volunteer as the "director" for the mini-series.  "ACTION!" Mike
wjoegreen
on 8/6/07 11:17 pm - Colonial Heights, VA
Geeesh, now all you need is a illustrator and a screenwriter to convert it to a reality series. Great work there guys!!!!
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