DS explanation for ER situation- Feedback requested

I feel the need to better prepare in the event that I am incapacitated in some way.  I came up with a one page document that I will share in google docs with family that would be involved in my care. I will print copies to have in my medical records, as well.  I want the explanation to be concise and understandable to average Joe's, but still thorough enough to be of benefit to my medical team.  The document contains a detailed table of vitamins and dosages. The below is what I came up with for an explanation: 

I had a bariatric procedure called the Biliopancreatic Diversion with Duodenal Switch on 4/2/2009 with Dr Michael Schweitzer at John Hopkins. This procedure is partially restrictive and very malabsorptive.

The procedure included a partial gastrectomy where 2/3rds of my stomach was removed along the greater curvature. My pyloric valve was preserved. This results in poorer absorption of calcium, iron, and B12.

My small intestine has been transected so that I have a bileopancreatic limb and an alimentary limb. The bile from my bileopancreatic limb doesn’t reach the contents from my alimentary limb until the last 100 cm of my small intestine (common channel). As a result, I only absorb approximately 50% of the protein I eat and 20% of the fat. I require 100 to 120 grams a day of highly bio-available protein (whey protein isolate, eggs, animal source protein) to maintain healthy protein related labs. I also must heavily supplement all of my fat soluble vitamins. They must be in dry / water miscible form in order for me to derive benefit.

It is important to note that I can have a partial / total blockage in my bileopancreatic limb that may only be diagnosable through imaging. I would not present many of the symptoms commonly associated with blockages such as vomiting and would still be able to defecate / pass gas as normal.

I would love any feedback or corrections you may have.  Thanks for all who made it through this way long post.