A poem...Through the DS Doorway

Here is a poem I wrote recently...I hope you all like it.  hehe

Through the DS Doorway...

I see dreams come alive
Its mystery and wonder.. if I ever survive
My thoughts are wishful as days go on by
To be a new person...I look to the sky

My days are not unforgiving as I thought they might be
For it is my future...this gift given to me
I thought all would be different in my outlook on life
It turns out its me, a whole lot of strife

My food is no burden I carry around
It gives unique pleasure...another gift found
There's beauty in the way it now feels
To be full easily and not between meals

The clothes I once wore are forever no more
For these I have given my last throw to the floor
Its scary and exciting all in one package
There is no more shame...a definite advantage

There is an exciting new journey I must take now I'm healed
To fix the fat mind that belongs in the field
Those thoughts are sitting...all there in wait
Those heavy sad thoughts...I now often hate

I watch in facination as my size shrinks on down
To miss all these joys...I would rather have drowned
An abundance of energy that just swirls around
This is my life...I no longer frown

My days used to be surrounded by fear
Of what I might look like to others I'm near
The pounds are almost gone...forever I hope
All thrown to the grave...the end of the rope

My journey is not over, for this I am sure
I don't mind my vits or protein thats pure
A small price to pay for what they gave
Chances to change and for life to be saved!!

by Denise Urbash

Wow!!! That's awesome. Thanks for sharing. I'll be switched in two weeks, and I can't wait.

Thank you so much.  You will do amazing.  I remember the two weeks before surgery...I was amazingly calm at that point.  I will keep my eyes open for your surgery updates.

Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us! And congrats on the amazing weight loss!

Your very welcome.  I am glad you liked it.  I have had a great journey in losing the weight...I can't wait till I hit goal. 

Very awesome Denise, thanks for sharing!

Thanks Diane!!

Like!

Thank you Kerry!!  I also wanted to thank you for you response to my 6.5mth post...I never really put the expressions with what was going on, but you are very right about that.  I feel a million times better and much more sure of myself now...Its been great.  Thanks again and all the best to you.

what a wonderful poem!!