11/10/05 ...
11/10/05
Thurs
05:27
Standing at the edge of the water
Breeze blowing across my skin
Moonlight ripples across the surface
Wanting to reach back, to change the past
Feeling the emotions of the wind
Sensing the energy of the water
Thinking thoughts, standing in the moment
Not able to discern the horizon from the waters edge
Thinking of this as a metaphor for my life
Not making a distinction in my life
Watching as one melts into the other
Not guiding my path, taking the path of least resistance
Funny thing, age
As you lose youth, you gain age
Something most want to stall
Yet with this age, comes many changes
From so many directions
Most spend their time trying to live in the past
Missing out what is happening in the now
Losing more of the most precious give they have been given
Time
A bitter sweet pill, Time
It stops for no one
Always moving onward
Never ceasing, always advancing, forward moving
I try to meet this thing called time
Only to watch it pass me by
Medicgeek10

Love it!!! There are times when I ask the Lord to take me home and other times when I love every single minute. I guess that's called life or the water's edge. Your poem reminds me of "The Road Not Taken," by Robert Frost. Ever since I was young, I've tried to take the road less travelled. Dad always encouraged us to do this. Your relationship with your daughter and your poetry remind me of my wonderful father. He would spend much time listening to me trying to recite our favorite poems with "feeling." I would practice in front of the mirror preparing for Dad, my toughest and most loyal critic. Thanks for the poems and the memories. My heart will always belong to Daddy!
Medicgeek, you rock!!!
Becky